The Resplendent World of the Sea, a poem by Ayush Das

BY AYUSH DAS – Age 11

One day as I was watching the wave on its way to the shore,
I saw a shell, a beautiful shell.
In the shallow water I bent,
Suddenly a wave swept me away:
And here I was able to see the wonderful world
Which everyone longed to see.
I saw the home of wonderful shells,
Some big, some small and some colorful.
I viewed some of the most beautiful creatures
And all went in a beautiful rhythm,
Very disciplined I must say.
I swam with a dolphin and explored this world
It had mysteries of tales from far and near:
I saw the little mermaids swim all about,
What a scene it was,
And I still remember it now.
It is time for me to go
But I will soon return to write more.

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Superb...... Keep it up! George T. 10/5/05

It is a good poem. Ayush S 1/13/06

The poet is very good in writing poems as is proved by this poem.

Aditya Banka 1/19/06

Das’s poem is quite well-written. But even while using blank verse, to maintain a certain amount of rhythm would make poetry more effective. Das should read poems written by poets of the English Romantic and Victorian Age for better grounding. Vishakha 2/26/06

Very imaginative, Ayush. I love your poem. I took that journey with you.

Yvonne Branch 9/18/08


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