BY BROOKE GRAY
My life is but a dream;
when I’m awake I seem
to be unseen.
When I’m asleep it seems to be great;
even when I’m with my mate.
Review or comment on My Life –
Reviews:
Short and sweet. Lovely……… – Samantha 10/15/05
So much said in so few words. Beautiful. – Annie 4/14/06
Lovely… nice… simple. Expresses our life. – Sara Yousri 4/19/06
Short and moving. – Marjan 11/4/06
Hey…..my name is Brooke Gray, too!!! Yay! – Brooke Gray 1/10/07
That’s my name,too. hahahahaha……. Cute poem. – Brooke Gray 9/7/07
That’s my name, too!! Did I write this poem………..? – Brooke Gray 12/4/07
Very moving… – Karen & Brooke 12/4/07
Sweet, simple, and moving…… – Thomas G. 4/3/08
Wait a second!! My name is Brooke Gray, too! This is scary.
– Brooke Gray 8/27/08
From the Admin: No more comments on the name, please. Critiques and reviews of the poem will be appreciated
Dear Brooke, your poem is very short but full of beauty. It is great!
– Mahsa 12/15/08