Superb...... Keep it up!                                                   -  George T.  10/5/05

It is a good poem.                                                           - Ayush S  1/13/06

The poet is very good in writing poems as is proved by this poem.

-  Aditya Banka  1/19/06

Das’s poem is quite well-written. But even while using blank verse, to maintain a certain amount of rhythm would make poetry more effective. Das should read poems written by poets of the English Romantic and Victorian Age for better grounding.                                                                                                                                                                                   -  Vishakha   2/26/06

Very imaginative, Ayush. I love your poem. I took that journey with you.

-  Yvonne Branch   9/18/08

Dear Ayush, your poem is a good one for a person who's 11 but I'm sure you can do better, so try to write more. You can also read older poems.

-  Mahsa 12/15/08

At your age this poem is great. I go to the beach every week so I share your experience. Continue to write.                                                                                                                                                   - Yvonne Branch  1/22/09